Sunday, September 20, 2009

Sunset Comments

Rating: 5.0

Scarlet flames the sunset in the early autumn twilight,
like a canopy of fire streaked with gold'
I sit gazing at this beautiful, awe inspiring sight,
as so many have before me, in days of eons old
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Sonya Florentino 21 September 2009

a golden sunset is the most beautiful and you have captured its magnificence... i echo Susan and Sandra.... regarding those beautiful lines.....

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Lakshmi Venkataraman 20 September 2009

extraordinary write.... delicious fuse of colors...... outstanding imagination! ! ! ! !

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Carol Gall 20 September 2009

images with your words make this really good 10

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Sandra Martyres 20 September 2009

playing melodies, to barren trees, in this autumn golden land, and stills the sounds of night, into thoughts of lonliness... Memorable lines in a beautiful poem with fetching images of Sunset...10

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Susan Jarvis 20 September 2009

Your beautiful and colourful images of an Autumn sunset fuse with human nature to create something spiritual - a well crafted and poignant poem. 'playing melodies to barren trees' is a truly magnificent line! S :)

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