Friday, December 9, 2005

Sunset Comments

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Sunset is a time for reflection …. mellow thoughts
Working out the day …. and how its run its course
Letting all the worries of your life unfold
Speaking in your mind the stories yet untold
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Philip Vincent Sanders
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Cynthia Aluning 09 December 2005

good rhymes and wonderful message to impart. Yeah ur right, all of us have ups and downs, a normal sunset and surise of our lives...good use of metaphors here. And by the way, u write like a painter vividly drawing his lines on the canvas, meticulous on every detail to paint, and that's what u are. U go poet...

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Philip Vincent Sanders

Philip Vincent Sanders

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