Sunset Comments

Hi Nosheen, I have come across another poem by name Sunset in ph, by Ms Jafarinoor. Totally different from your write, but a should-read. I invite you to read it.

Hi Nosheen, golden rust horizon marks the sinking sun Fantastic image, bringing out the nature's extravaganza in full. Reminding me of a shloka from Kumaara Sambhavam by the great Kaalidasa: Noonam unnamati yajwanam pati Sharwarasya thamaso nishiddhaye Pundareekamukhi, poorva dingmukham Kaithakairiva rajobhiraavrutham (Original Sanskrit version) Shiv tells Parvathi, I am sure, moon is rising. The eastern horizon looks as if sprayed with the golden dust of Ketaka flower. I have to change 'Kaalidasa' in the ancient Indian saying, Upama Kalidaasasya to 'Nosheen Irfan'.

'Brevity is the soul of wit'................ S..U..C..C..I..N..C..T and S..W..E..E..T! Top marks

Nice poem on sunset. Simple and beautiful.

By a crimson shower. Nice work.

Well done. Now I would have added an observer even if the observer was an animal. Something that links sentient life to the beauty you describe.

A beautiful description of the most beautiful sun set ever seen or read, Nosheen. LOVED IT....10+++