Sunset- -2 Comments

Hi Nosheen, Another exquisite poem from you after a long time. The Sun God has always been a source of inspiration for man, from time immemorial- the Sun, as you have said, who returns everyday, keeping his promise. Ra the ancient Egyptian God. In Indian myths and old poetry, lotus flower is the lover of Sun God. and she closes her eyes, the moment sun sets, only greet him with a warm smile when he returns. And he always keeps his word! We are only human, and to err (by design) is human; we have 'no need to' keep our words! Great! ++100++

Two of my favorite topics = sunset and betrayal. Very well done.

Inspiring, Keep moving and never give up is the real message.....One should take the lessons from nature, Nature, the Master and Teacher, A perfect 10++++

The circle of life keeps moving with the nature..one more night and one more day, one more day filled with hope and one more night filled with grief... Yes you are right at the end of the day we are human with all our emotions. One more piece of heart touchy write up.100 +++ wiht a hug. Stay blessed girl.