Sunset Comments

Everything slows then stops we are no different? .......well penned Akham

An excellent three liner! Pragmatic expression.......10

Excellent topic and handling of it! ! ! ! 10+++++++++

Taste of life! Man in a haste! ! Not to waste time; With the paste of the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

the sunset is a must as much as is its rising somewhere else all is cyclic

Old age is like sunset. Though man is in haste yet his pace is slow. A beautiful philosophical poem executed concisely. Thank you dear Akham for sharing this poem.10

Akham, such a marvelous poem.....10+++++++++++++