`Tis now the lantern of the day
Shall slowly start to slip away
To fall into a distant place
Beyond the earth and set in space
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Another beautiful picture you paint with your words. It flows effortlessly!
...Like having gone on a pleasant adventure. Very soothing. Enjoyed.
The east never meets with the west... When awoken - the east dawn is the best To fly to zenith to the golden sun at noon... The best - when the tired west sun in the evening brings you dreaming soon... ;)
I have read this poem over and over again, verse by verse - line by line - word by word - syllable by syllable; until it lingers into the darkness and softly sets into west. This is truely a literary; painted work of art.....
Oh like i heading to the west and looking to sunset sink into the hills/sea...your imagery creates a beautiful combination of feeling..it soothing! ! ! like the colors in the sky! ! wonderful...Beautiful and wonderful...i am glad to read this! _Unwritten Soul
the great messenger of nature as an inspiration to reflect the sagacity and unfathomable greatness that the finest creation in the world can bring, and the tenacity of the universal mother -the earth, who bears all... continue.... great to read those soul stirring lines....
That was the most beautiful sunset ever, what a pleasure to read.
This is beautiful - it puts me in mind of Gray's Elegy - it has that style and flow to it.Remarkable.
This is so beautiful... I stand in awe. Your words match the beauty of the sunset perfectly.
Wow! What a lovely sunset! A fantastic poem! ! A 10 for this!