Friday, March 16, 2012

Sunset Comments

Rating: 3.5

`Tis now the lantern of the day
Shall slowly start to slip away
To fall into a distant place
Beyond the earth and set in space
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Valerie Dohren
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Valsa George 07 December 2012

Wow! What a lovely sunset! A fantastic poem! ! A 10 for this!

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Stevie Taite 05 September 2012

Another beautiful picture you paint with your words. It flows effortlessly!

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Linda May Fox 20 June 2012

You definitely paint a picture.

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Walterrean Salley 19 May 2012

...Like having gone on a pleasant adventure. Very soothing. Enjoyed.

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Lyudmila Purgina 06 May 2012

The east never meets with the west... When awoken - the east dawn is the best To fly to zenith to the golden sun at noon... The best - when the tired west sun in the evening brings you dreaming soon... ;)

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G.R. Gaus 18 April 2012

I have read this poem over and over again, verse by verse - line by line - word by word - syllable by syllable; until it lingers into the darkness and softly sets into west. This is truely a literary; painted work of art.....

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Juan Olivarez 10 April 2012

So very well written, beautiful words.

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Dave James 05 April 2012

Loved the softness of this poem, perfect night-time read.

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Unwritten Soul 02 April 2012

Oh like i heading to the west and looking to sunset sink into the hills/sea...your imagery creates a beautiful combination of feeling..it soothing! ! ! like the colors in the sky! ! wonderful...Beautiful and wonderful...i am glad to read this! _Unwritten Soul

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 01 April 2012

the great messenger of nature as an inspiration to reflect the sagacity and unfathomable greatness that the finest creation in the world can bring, and the tenacity of the universal mother -the earth, who bears all... continue.... great to read those soul stirring lines....

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Heather Wilson 24 March 2012

That was the most beautiful sunset ever, what a pleasure to read.

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Neil Crawford 22 March 2012

This is beautiful - it puts me in mind of Gray's Elegy - it has that style and flow to it.Remarkable.

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O.o. W 22 March 2012

it is indeed one of many representation of Sunset that inspires

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Smoky Hoss 17 March 2012

This is so beautiful... I stand in awe. Your words match the beauty of the sunset perfectly.

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