Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Sunrise/Sunset Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was a
beautiful sunrise.
Even in the
muddy trench
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David Blair
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Excellent poem David, reminds me that in life the simplest things are best and cam easily be overlooked, thnx for sharing.

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Paul Brookes 22 May 2013

Ah the futility of war especially the 1914 -18 Says a great deal with a sparsity of words Well penned BB : O)

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 22 May 2013

The pathos in the poem couldn't go deeper with more words. The poem hits point blank.10 for this inspiring work.

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