Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Sunrise Sunset Comments

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Sunrise sunset in the mood of the way
In the colors of flame and darkish hour
Every shine time of night and the day
Like golden horizon of a new flower
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Peter S. Quinn
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Jean Dament 10 February 2010

I enjoyed reading this lovely poem that shows off a sunset & sunrise well here with it's great imagery & descriptions. In the last line I would have put 'on to a new day true' see what you think. Thanks for sharing. I have a similiar poem called 'Twilight Over Malta' if you care to review it. Thanks Spiritsong

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