Tuesday, April 11, 2006

Sunrise At Garibaldi Comments

Rating: 5.0

The timbers rise out of the bay
On a clouded, sunlit morning
Reflection's pier in the water
An old weather-worn shack
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Laurence Overmire
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Sandra Fowler 11 April 2006

Wonderful imagery, Each new day is a gift.. An excellent poem. Kind regards, Sandra

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John Libertus 11 April 2006

Excellent, Laurence, first rate! You rarely see this quality of poetry.

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Edwin Robinette 11 April 2006

I love the way you 'painted' this scene....I've spent many a day on the docks and this brings back some cool memories!

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