Tuesday, December 11, 2012

Sunrise And Sunset Comments

Rating: 4.5

When I awake in the morning and see the sunrise
My heart skips a beat as I begin to clear my eyes
My soul says what a mighty God I serve
To be in the land of the living and to feel every nerve
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Patricia Grantham
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Ken E Hall 23 August 2015

Beautiful words as the sun sets and rises ironic as I read it the Beetles sang on the radio Let it Be and it was made for it so well... thanks and regards

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Roseann Shawiak 23 July 2015

Tender rhythm flowing with the sun rising and setting, illuminating the beauty that is everywhere given to us by God, Himself. Can feel His presence through your poem, a very quiet and still feeling of grace. Thank you for sharing, Patricia. RoseAnn

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* Sunprincess * 02 June 2014

................oh this is a beautiful poem...your appreciation of the sunrise and sunset gave me a big smile .......................~~~~~~ love this poem ~~~~~..............................

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Khairul Ahsan 30 December 2013

I am amazed by your natural flow of words describing the beauty of sunrise, sunset and the moon. The first and the last stanzas recognize God's Might and Kindness. Very well written indeed.

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Amitava Sur 24 October 2013

So lovely rhythmic flow of words to express the beauty in nature..... simply excellent.

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Louis Rams 30 July 2013

on this poem, one word EXCELLENT

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R.j. Wynn 22 July 2013

Perfect tens of hugs.

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Joseph Anderson 01 June 2013

A lovely poem to describe the most beautiful times of our day, expressed with deep faith. Well done my friend

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Sunrise to sunset, there is beauty hidden everywhere. Please read my poem What's New? At your leisure. Thank you.

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Valerie Dohren 17 February 2013

Lovely poem about the sunrise and sunset - beautifully described.

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Captain Cur 16 February 2013

Beautiful poem of faith.

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Gajanan Mishra 11 December 2012

good poem. thanks. i invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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