When I awake in the morning and see the sunrise
My heart skips a beat as I begin to clear my eyes
My soul says what a mighty God I serve
To be in the land of the living and to feel every nerve
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Tender rhythm flowing with the sun rising and setting, illuminating the beauty that is everywhere given to us by God, Himself. Can feel His presence through your poem, a very quiet and still feeling of grace. Thank you for sharing, Patricia. RoseAnn
................oh this is a beautiful poem...your appreciation of the sunrise and sunset gave me a big smile .......................~~~~~~ love this poem ~~~~~..............................
I am amazed by your natural flow of words describing the beauty of sunrise, sunset and the moon. The first and the last stanzas recognize God's Might and Kindness. Very well written indeed.
So lovely rhythmic flow of words to express the beauty in nature..... simply excellent.
A lovely poem to describe the most beautiful times of our day, expressed with deep faith. Well done my friend
Sunrise to sunset, there is beauty hidden everywhere. Please read my poem What's New? At your leisure. Thank you.
Lovely poem about the sunrise and sunset - beautifully described.
good poem. thanks. i invite you to read my poems and comment.
Beautiful words as the sun sets and rises ironic as I read it the Beetles sang on the radio Let it Be and it was made for it so well... thanks and regards