Sunrise Comments

I like this. The way you've written it and the way it flows.

A beautiful poem, just lovely thank you.

a truly sublime poem... I added it to my favorites thank you

I really like this one. I like that hook you have of repeating the word 'beauteous, ' and, also, the scene you paint for us shines through really vibrantly, vivid as a good watercolor. It almost makes me want to wake up in the early morning tomorrow to watch the sunrise.

Oh Valerie, this was a beautiful way to start my day! Perfect metre, a lyrical gentle walk into a new dawn. Love it.

Beautiful..............reminds me Celine dion's I am alive......................that was truly a song of a beautiful, hopeful, inspirational day :)

I love this, it flows beautifully

beautiful poem, love the way you ended it!

A very beautiful poem, like it. A great write.

Thank you for reminding us of the beauty of a new day, as everyday life gets in the way. Wonderful poem yet again. You have a great talent Valerie. Another of yours I have saved to favourites :)

gives one the strength to get up, and go! good poetry!

This is a nice poem with a deeper meaning and a message repeated every day until it sinks in.

Valerie, thanks for the lovely invitation. This is such an inspiring poem. (I’m glad I chose this one to read.) Very uplifting, enlightening and revealing. I smiled and grinned as I read - it was just that delightful. Please continue your incredible gift. I’ve enjoyed my visit, and will certainly be visiting your field again.