Sunrise Comments

wonderful, last stanza sums it all. thanks alot. take care

A vision unfolds wonderful lyric poem Mari

Diamond on the leaf Gleaming in delight I sneak up to it Sparkles of light drown me Spellbound and speechless A vision unfolds A new life, a beginning! ! ! ...loved it...: -)

Diamond on the leaf Gleaming in delight I sneak up to it Sparkles of light drown me Spellbound and speechless A vision unfolds A new life, a beginning! ! ! sunrise bring new glimmer of hope and eachday with new mesage with new opening of leaf inlife.... otherwise life is sorrowful occean andwe got to live withit....beautiful write....10 read mine....sun set....innocence regained...

a great emotional poem.apt title.thanx for sharing. voted10 surya

Yes, ones transformation too is Sunrise; beautiful!