Sunrise Comments

Beautiful poem about the sun. I adore the sunrises and the sunsets. Such natural beauty to behold. Especially like the 'sun's blazing arms'. Your imagery and language is a delight in this poem. HG: -) xx

Very delightful read. I want to be a part of it all. So many nice images and deep feeling of doing and wanting something worthwhile and lasting.

This is your best yet. A fascinating celebration of the ritual of dawn. You use words with flourish like a a renaissance painter - In particular 'its yellow burning arms' and 'lost in the vanity of our senses' stood out. Superb poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

so beautiful thanks for sharing