When the pregnant night breaks open its vent with few drizzles
when the grey stretch elasticizes itself with a pinkish rift
There, the celestial babe with his fulgent face facing earth born
Exulted earth exalts his every rise from aqua, and hill
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Exulted earth exalts his every rise from aqua, and hill Sprawling a roll-on blanket of gold giving earth a big embrace...great!
Sprawling a roll-on blanket of gold giving earth a big embrace // superb imagery excellently delineated the scenery moment of rising sun
Beautiful comparison! The 'pregnant night', fulgent face', 'blanket of gold'..... a series of beautiful images and phrases! A 10
The very phrase, 'Pregnant night' is a wonderful contemplation! A beautiful poem dear madam.....10
When the pregnant night breaks open its vent.. such a fine poem.. very first verse catches the attention. thank u dear poetess. tony
A beautiful poem that captures the wonders of nature., We can see what you see, Indira. Superb imagery.
Sprawling a roll-on blanket of gold giving earth a big embrace......touching concluding. Beautiful poem Five stars.