Sunday, June 4, 2017

Sunrise Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun rises.
The wind blows.
Like a tree.
True love grows and grows.
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Lamar Cole
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Daniella Hardy 19 August 2017

Your poem is written in a very nice way it has inspired me to write the same way just not about love instead about my family hopefully I come up with something soon.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2017

It is a beautiful poem on true love having thrilling expression with nice penmanship. I like most lines are.. . Like a flower. True love smells fresh. Like a river. True love stands time's test. Thanks for sharing.

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Luo Zhihai 16 July 2017

Like a flower. True love smells fresh. Good sentences!

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Paul Warren 04 July 2017

Love expressed so very well in your lines.

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Rini Shibu 14 June 2017

Smell of true love never fades...

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