Tuesday, November 8, 2022

Sunrise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Swimming on dark wave
Tearing the crystal sky wall
Spreading best yolk light
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 08 November 2022

I love the beautiful poem and its imagery, and also the gorgeous picture!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 November 2022

while I'm reading your poem, your words conjure up a most beautiful haiku, Mahtab!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 November 2022

Thought very precisely and emerged as the most beautiful haiku, it has become a very beautiful painting, I admire the graphic too, not only 5 Stars for you, but myriads of Stars, Mahtab.

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David Wood 08 November 2022

A great Haiku Mahtab. Sometimes we are swimming against the tide.

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