Sunrise Comments

Cool breeze, calm and soothing; Chirping birds, butterflies dancing.. buds, freshness of nature... perfume. sunlight. all the wonders of nature your mind has captured well. thank you.

The buds open after a sweet sleep; Bats going to bed seeing the sunbeam. The shining sun, giving light and heat, Providing the environment a protective sheath. Wonderful nature description and powerful observation of nature. thank you very much for this poem- You are so young and you can write like this. i do wonder. God bless you. tony

Well tried Pankti and as you are pankti then panlti can compose a nice kavita th poem well tried to rhyme you have killed the body kept the soul it can be even better thank you beta