Monday, April 6, 2015

Sunny Day Comments

Rating: 4.0

I dreams the sunny day
Ray falls in the ocean
Glitters like stars of night
Finding the own easiest way
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Subarna Chakraborty
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Edward Kofi Louis 15 March 2016

Hired to protect the sky. Nice work.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 January 2016

Some glitters or some stand still The huge amount of night stars Looks like an army Hired to protect the sky I dreams a total day Full of happiness, sadness and Milky Way. your vision of the dreamy night and the night sky and the day and the sun and the light. very nicely written poem. thank you dear poetess. tony

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 April 2015

Shining words soulful in parts yet a super poem altogether beautiful to read. I like how it ends in the milky way wow. Pls do review my latest poem too titled mother natures. ......

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Kelly Kurt 06 April 2015

A Lovely poem, Alisha Thanks for sharing Peace and happiness

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