Friday, October 10, 2008

Sunlight Through The Office Window Comments

Rating: 4.8

I sit in this place
and through desk diary do trace
the filligres of light
Forgetting all sensations
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JAMES ROBERTS
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Patricia Gale 10 November 2008

A moment well captured!

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Fay Slimm 15 October 2008

A moment in time Jim - just captured in such a way with your poet's pen that it takes the reader with you into each phrase and leaves us with just a little of your heart. Well done. I love the word filigree and glad you used that where you did 10 from Fay

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Thomas Kurkoski 10 October 2008

Very nice concept, one I think we all can relate to as writers/poets. And just the right length to make the point without overkilling it! Cheers, Thomas

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Marilyn Lott 10 October 2008

I write in my ledger every single night - just jot down my thoughts, my accomplishments for the day etc. and it's fun to read back and think forward to tomorrow. I enjoyed this, James. A '10! ' from me as well. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Lynda Robson 10 October 2008

Nice dreamy piece, the sunlight playing with your thoughts, thanks James, 10 for you Lynda xx

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