Thursday, July 7, 2022

Sunlight The Elixir Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the dead day's tomb
Rises the sun like a Phoenix
Spreading around beaming might
Of potent warmth and golden light.
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 16 August 2022

The joys and promise that awaken with the new sunrise are well evoked in this beauty of a poem.5 stars.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 July 2022

Magnificent poetic expressions that fuel the spirit to soar. Very uplifting.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 July 2022

Magnificent poetic expressions that fuel the spirit to

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 July 2022

Beautiful poem adorned with great metaphors and wonderful images.

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Marvellous. The metaphor for night ‘dead day's tomb' is exquisite, innovative. A poem of hope and trust and positivity. Top score and Myfav

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Parameswaran Nair 11 July 2022

Thank you very much dear friend Unnikrishnan. The truth that sun is the basic source of energy is seldom borne in mind

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 07 July 2022

This poem is a testment to the hope of the sun Bravo!

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Parameswaran Nair 11 July 2022

Thank you very much. The theory that life formed first in water may be correct, but without the warmth of sun it would never have happened

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