when our day breaks with light
our sun smiles and shines on us
making our world sunny and bright
warming our head and our toes
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so lovley feeling....10 yes sun is bright makes us to fight for our right with suvival delight
, , its still no summers here, , , though i think i love winters alittle more, , , , sunprincess would be delighted to see summers approaching, , , : P nice poem, , ,
kiss winter goodbye, would love to kiss summer bye bye, 31 centigrade today 2nd month in autumn in OZ but thankful for Sunlight...regards
kiss winter goodbye, would love to kiss summer bye bye, 31 centigrade today 2nd month in autumn in OZ but thankful for Sunlight...regards
.sunlight gives new life, and nurtures God's creations..............lovely write.......
You wrote this poem the same day as your ecological poem on widespread damage. I'm glad I could read this positive poem in tandem with the warning poem. We NEED to take pleasure and joy in nature so we don't despair. Abandoning hope won't help us or the next generation, but treasuring the wonders of the world will. So your voice is especially lyrical, keep singing the songs we need to hear. BTW thanks for the positive feedback on BETWEEN STONE AND STARS. I have to say I enjoy re-reading that poem myself. It speaks to me, and it has one of the best titles I've ever come up with. When I drive past the church I wrote it in, I just feel... good inside.
After the hazy and chilly winter, with what excitement, everyone will be greeting Sun in all his glory! A sweet write!
A Shining sun of a poem. Brightly beaming my friend!
Bright sunlight is always welcome. Beautiful poem. Thank you.
A short, sweet and sunshiny poem. Well done my friend!