Wednesday, August 26, 2020

Sunglasses In The Shade Comments

Rating: 4.9

bright pink fingernails
a straw hat low on her brow
cool in sunglasses
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
COMMENTS
Dr Dillip K Swain 26 March 2024

A fascinating poem entitled, 'Sunglasses in the shade'. Loved the phrase, 'beneath a green tree calm breeze'. Top score!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 December 2021

Really enjoyed this one once agaain

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bri edwards 28 February 2021

Evelyn, with PH as it is now, you may no longer visit, or you may but never see this note. I hope you are well. i persevere, now and then, hoping PH will recover someday to its glory. bri : )

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Indira Renganathan 18 February 2021

Nice picturesque description about a mysterious girl and the ambience there at...5*****

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Terry Craddock 26 November 2020

waking in a bland fingernail dull morning is smile applied in bright pink fingernail polish, summertime leisure wild wave crash listening to a beach nearby, is an August reign of gold to a mysterious girl with treasure epic stories untold

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Terry Craddock 26 November 2020

hot in the fierce burning overhead sun, but cool beneath a green tree shade breeze, slight movements in time a few steps in simple distance, can change a frying sun burn heat into a calm paradise of soothing shade,

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Chinedu Dike 02 September 2020

Beautiful lines with captivating images. An absolutely pleasing composition. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched, madam.

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Michael Jack 02 September 2020

Nice poem. shadows of August in the midst of reign of gold mysterious girl

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Bill Cantrell 02 September 2020

Oh, I’m so happy to see this selected as modern poem! ! ! Congratulations on this fine piece of poetry! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 September 2020

A lovely poem vividly depicting a beautiful scenery and a mysterious girl. Great imagery and brevity. Congratulations for a well deserved accolade.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 September 2020

Shadows! ! ! ! Heat of the summer! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Lyn Paul 02 September 2020

Summers heat captured well hiding mystery.

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 September 2020

Summer girl has come On the summer beach full fresh Hot thru sunglasses Cool coconut juice The heart wet with luscious lips Under the clouds boat Far poetic words Wove charming wave of poem By the soul of pen

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Varsha M 02 September 2020

Beautiful poem. Congratulations for being selected as poem of the day.

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Leeann Azzopardi 02 September 2020

This poem is as cool as a Steve McQueen movie Bravo!

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 September 2020

at summer's hot verge beneath a green tree calm breeze wild waves crash nearby very fine expressions.. tony

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 September 2020

First of all CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, dear Evelyn. The photograph is loveliest with the reflection of the parasol Work of Art, dear poetess! We are treated here with three Haiku verses, such haiku full excellence. I oft give critic with superlatives when the poet deserves that. And you deserve the most. Honoured by Poem Hunter Com, WOW! God's greatest Blessings, dear Evelyn! A 10++

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Deluke Muwanigwa 02 September 2020

Lovely. Good time at the beach.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 September 2020

A well penned poem of the day. Simply fascinating.Congrats on your featured piece...10++

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