bright pink fingernails
a straw hat low on her brow
cool in sunglasses
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Evelyn, with PH as it is now, you may no longer visit, or you may but never see this note. I hope you are well. i persevere, now and then, hoping PH will recover someday to its glory. bri : )
Nice picturesque description about a mysterious girl and the ambience there at...5*****
waking in a bland fingernail dull morning is smile applied in bright pink fingernail polish, summertime leisure wild wave crash listening to a beach nearby, is an August reign of gold to a mysterious girl with treasure epic stories untold
hot in the fierce burning overhead sun, but cool beneath a green tree shade breeze, slight movements in time a few steps in simple distance, can change a frying sun burn heat into a calm paradise of soothing shade,
Beautiful lines with captivating images. An absolutely pleasing composition. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched, madam.
Nice poem. shadows of August in the midst of reign of gold mysterious girl
Oh, I’m so happy to see this selected as modern poem! ! ! Congratulations on this fine piece of poetry! ! !
A lovely poem vividly depicting a beautiful scenery and a mysterious girl. Great imagery and brevity. Congratulations for a well deserved accolade.
Shadows! ! ! ! Heat of the summer! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Summer girl has come On the summer beach full fresh Hot thru sunglasses Cool coconut juice The heart wet with luscious lips Under the clouds boat Far poetic words Wove charming wave of poem By the soul of pen
Beautiful poem. Congratulations for being selected as poem of the day.
at summer's hot verge beneath a green tree calm breeze wild waves crash nearby very fine expressions.. tony
First of all CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, dear Evelyn. The photograph is loveliest with the reflection of the parasol Work of Art, dear poetess! We are treated here with three Haiku verses, such haiku full excellence. I oft give critic with superlatives when the poet deserves that. And you deserve the most. Honoured by Poem Hunter Com, WOW! God's greatest Blessings, dear Evelyn! A 10++
A well penned poem of the day. Simply fascinating.Congrats on your featured piece...10++
A fascinating poem entitled, 'Sunglasses in the shade'. Loved the phrase, 'beneath a green tree calm breeze'. Top score!