Friday, November 13, 2015

Sunflower Comments

Rating: 4.8

You, the Sunflower, hugging the Sunny hours;
Attract bees in quite a gracious way,
But the snowy winter at last showers -
Requiem they sing and beauty decays.
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Debashish Sarkar
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Chinedu Dike 24 November 2015

An insightful piece of poetry depicting the essence of external beauty and it's shortcomings, well articulated and nicely penned. I like the rhyme scheme of the poem. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing Debashish.

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Souren Mondal 14 November 2015

Interesting poem Debasish.. Thanks for sharing.. ______________ 'You'll grow old and your limbs will tire, When beauty will reek none will admire, Neither the fool nor the Sire, This rhyme will stay - But bodies expire.' Did you have Andrew Marvel's 'To His Coy Mistress' in mind when you wrote these lines? ? _____ A nice work.. Thanks :)

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Debashish Sarkar 14 November 2015

i wrote this poem keeping in mind, those people who are basically snob and values beauty more than inner grace...thanks for reading

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Debashish Sarkar 14 November 2015

Thanks for reading, i wrote these lines keeping in mind, those people who values beauty more than inner grace.

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Souren Mondal 14 November 2015

The pleasure's mine...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2015

Sunflower is very lovely and affectionate. Choosing nice title you have done right description. Wonderful poem shared really...10

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Debashish Sarkar 14 November 2015

Thanks for reading and your valuable comment

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