Wednesday, December 17, 2008

(((Sundown)) Comments

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The dusk is when the new day awakes
In the morning the sun is rising brightly
To welcome the horizon of beginnings
Reckons the blissful existence of life.
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Joseph Poewhit 17 December 2008

Sort of like life, SUNRISE to SUNSET

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Ency Bearis 17 December 2008

nice simile poem...implied well about life..well penned...10 Ency Bearis

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Fiona Davidson 17 December 2008

Lovely write...you've captured the stages of the day so well...thank you

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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