Saturday, February 9, 2008

Sundown Comments

Rating: 5.0

An apricot colored sky with hues of orange and red
Slightly cast against a baby blue evening
Milky white clouds forming over head
A February sundown slowly lingering
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Patricia Gale
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Vivacious and colourful, yet somehow also serene and relaxing. This is profoundly stirring work. t x

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 10 February 2008

A great picture you paint of the sun going down, it's beautiful Colours touching and so profound, Beautiful poetry Patricia.. Andy x 10

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Thad Wilk 09 February 2008

A lovely poem Patricia! ! A wonderland you have, in YOUR back yard retreat! ! *10*! ! Best wishes Friend Thad

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 09 February 2008

My, oh my, oh my, Ms. Patricia...I could feel the pop & crackle of the fire & see the hypnotic quaver of the blue heart within itself....An imagelovers delight....And so i was delighted! Excellent work, young lady! ~ FjR ~

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