It's not a beautiful day
Just gray and snowy
And I don't want to be reminded of yr smile
For it gives me no pleasure
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Though the tone is sad, a nice poem Lee Ann. Very much picturesque
Beautifully penned LeeAnn with heartfelt emotion, Both powerful and poignant.
Poignant, "I …want to … hide from the world as tears begin to flow ".. emotional, very poetic. Captivating images. Top score
Deeply poignant and touching. A great depiction of a lost love so beautifully expressed..
I get the feeling that it is not just Sunday that the person is not there.
/‘I don't want to be reminded of yr smile / For it gives me no pleasure'/…/‘ Only yr smile can make me feel whole / The absence of it grows my discontent'/ What happened?
A beautiful metaphoric picture of the incredible need of 'warmth of a comforter', so human, so deep and real. Incredible poem.
A heart wrenching read, this was painful to read that experience, but so relatable. Powerful work LeeAnn. I do hope your feeling better
Another powerfully emotional poem that is a companion to you on your healing journey.
Missing someone in the sunday is really sad. Nice write. Enjoyed.
the simplicity of word choice and the grayness of the portrayal of lonely days---these are the hallmarks of heart-touching poetry-----a thousand kind stars and a fav