Saturday, February 11, 2023

Sunday Without You Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's not a beautiful day
Just gray and snowy
And I don't want to be reminded of yr smile
For it gives me no pleasure
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Susan Williams 16 February 2023

the simplicity of word choice and the grayness of the portrayal of lonely days---these are the hallmarks of heart-touching poetry-----a thousand kind stars and a fav

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 13 February 2023

Though the tone is sad, a nice poem Lee Ann. Very much picturesque

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 February 2023

Beautifully penned LeeAnn with heartfelt emotion, Both powerful and poignant.

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Poignant, "I …want to … hide from the world as tears begin to flow ".. emotional, very poetic. Captivating images. Top score

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Pallavi Tripathi 12 February 2023

This is good!

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Jayne Louise Davies 12 February 2023

Wonderful LeeAnn x Thanks for sharing x

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 12 February 2023

beautiful poem shared.......

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 February 2023

Deeply poignant and touching. A great depiction of a lost love so beautifully expressed..

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Jim McGill 11 February 2023

I get the feeling that it is not just Sunday that the person is not there.

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Jim McGill 11 February 2023

/‘I don't want to be reminded of yr smile / For it gives me no pleasure'/…/‘ Only yr smile can make me feel whole / The absence of it grows my discontent'/ What happened?

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Smoky Hoss 11 February 2023

A beautiful metaphoric picture of the incredible need of 'warmth of a comforter', so human, so deep and real. Incredible poem.

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Kevin Patrick 11 February 2023

A heart wrenching read, this was painful to read that experience, but so relatable. Powerful work LeeAnn. I do hope your feeling better

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Richard Wlodarski 11 February 2023

Another powerfully emotional poem that is a companion to you on your healing journey.

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 February 2023

Missing someone in the sunday is really sad. Nice write. Enjoyed.

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Anjandev Roy 11 February 2023

This is simply brilliant......

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Anjandev Roy 11 February 2023

The absence of it grows my discontent....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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