" qualm
an uneasy feeling of doubt, worry, or fear, especially about one's own conduct; a misgiving."
last two lines: might you want a comma before " though" ?
the mystery is " why is someone all alone in a 'hall' at night? " maybe she/he fell asleep during the concert and everybody else let him/her sleep as THEY left.
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" qualm an uneasy feeling of doubt, worry, or fear, especially about one's own conduct; a misgiving." last two lines: might you want a comma before " though" ? the mystery is " why is someone all alone in a 'hall' at night? " maybe she/he fell asleep during the concert and everybody else let him/her sleep as THEY left. topics aren't revealing to MyPoemList bri :)
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