Sunday, September 8, 2019

Sunday Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Staying awake this hour of midnight,
Lonely sitting without anyone,
For any kind of conversation,
In this big empty hall situation,
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Solomon Senxer
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Bri Edwards 13 November 2019

" qualm an uneasy feeling of doubt, worry, or fear, especially about one's own conduct; a misgiving." last two lines: might you want a comma before " though" ? the mystery is " why is someone all alone in a 'hall' at night? " maybe she/he fell asleep during the concert and everybody else let him/her sleep as THEY left. topics aren't revealing to MyPoemList bri :)

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Solomon Senxer 13 November 2019

Comment appreciated! Thank you very much!

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