Wednesday, October 31, 2007

Sunday Morning Comments

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Its Sunday morning
And I'm ready to shed the
Past weekends sins,
But this day is different...
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Aaron Tate 19 February 2008

Truth. Repent is all the Lord ask's. Most people hide it, bury it or put it into the closet. Good write. A true meaning, -black hearts-. Its amazing huh? :)

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Greenwolfe 1962 08 February 2008

Boy, that's a message you don't often hear. At least publicly. You actually got some rhyme in there and that's good. I like the energy of your writing. I bet you really like doing this. I don't expect you're ever going to give it up. Not that I want you to. But it seems like you have real genuine potential. I know that can be a damnable word but I don't think it's something you can't handle, so that's why I said it. Greenwolfe 1962

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