As winter's chill begins to fade,
A cold spring day, with frost displayed,
I wrap my coat around me tight,
And head to church, where warmth and light,
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At 11yrs old God could already see how you could shine his light for him! .. Truly Blessed And Truly Beautiful! ..++++++++++++++++++++++
Truly Magnificent! .. So beautifully painted and etched into your readers hearts! .. Ever So Many Endless 10'S And More! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++
But we are warmed, by the love we've shared! .. This ever so beautifully the feelings of Church! .. Where there is a special warmth and glow! .. As God touches our hearts! ..
What a heartwarming and wonderful poem. It stirs the spirit and warms the soul. You captured brilliantly the feelings we usually feel after Sunday mass. The ultimate stanza says it all! Liked this poem and great to know you wrote this poem when you were eleven years old. Amazing write, indeed!
What a perfect poem to sum up the wonder of a Sunday praising God and being instructed in his ways! This poem has fabulous description and it reads like a breathe of fresh air!
Visualising poem, loved reading every bit of it.