Sunday, November 12, 2017

Sunday Hat Comments

Rating: 5.0

She stands at the bus stop.
A strong wind blows off her pink Sunday hat.
She rushes to pick it up.
She trips and falls.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 July 2018

Flow of love has been touchingly expressed in this poem. The story is enchanting and amusing. I wish to quote..... A strong wind blows off her pink Sunday hat. She rushes to pick it up. She trips and falls. But she is helped up by a gentleman so handsome and tall A beautiful poem amazingly shared.10

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Practicing Poetess 14 November 2017

Oh, I just LOVE happy endings! Hats off to you (no pun intended) for such a charmingly sweet poem!

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Rini. 12 November 2017

A lovely love story lam.10

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Rini. 12 November 2017

A lovely love story..10

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Ravi Kopra 12 November 2017

A pretty lovely gullible Chinese lady Comes to the USA for studies She misses her bus at the bus stop She was going to sign a house lease A man looking like a gentleman Gives her a ride but takes her to his apartment. Rapes her. Murders her. Dumps her somewhere Her fate didn't end up in a wedding cake. Source: Current news in Chicago.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 November 2017

How sweet! This is a fairy tale story! Sometimes, fate pulls you to your desired goal. The young lady met her soul mate. Very well done, Lamar! A full vote for this poem.

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