Thursday, November 13, 2014

Sunday Gal, With No Knickers* ….. [humor; Risqué; Short-Medium; Ph-Inspired] Comments

Rating: 4.8

As the Vicar ascended the church pulpit,
to give his weekly God-inspired talk,
he peered out over the congregation,
and at one young gal his eyes did balk.
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Bri Edwards
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The ‘comely maiden' could be an Indian from India, because knickers (I think) are pretty costly here. At least, so says my wife. : )

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Khairul Ahsan 15 January 2019

I wish Ruth Walters too had read this poem and made some comment. A bit too risque though, the Vicars vision has been described in a risk free manner.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2014

In the front pew, a rough wooden bench......beautiful humour poem shared. Personal realization is in beautiful mode. Always your words do magic. Excellent one.

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