Saturday, July 7, 2012

Sunday Ajayi Comments

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Sky pensives and the birds gnash,
Because of you we wear our black sash;
We follow'd in a tearful promenade,
Chanting the name of our lost comrade.
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Joseph Oladehinde Ibikunle
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Ifedayo Oshin 03 August 2012

Sad.. but the emotions are well conveyed... still watch your grammar too.. the couplet end rhyming is good.

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Joseph Oladehinde Ibikunle

Joseph Oladehinde Ibikunle

Alagbado, Lagos.
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