Sunday, July 22, 2012

Sunday Afternoon Blues Comments

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Trying in vain to free
Myself from you
Noticing the discomfort 
Hoping change within
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Robin Bennett 22 July 2012

Rick this is such an excellent write! So emotional, and your word choice is just stellar! I love the way you used the lines. Instead of just a diary piece this is true poetry. It reads so easy and captured me from the start. Such talent. I will be reading more from you.

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