Saturday, December 17, 2022

Sunday Comments

Rating: 3.2

Sunday is the cruelest day of the week
It stretches monotony into a cloud soaked day
seeping the inebriation of Saturdays
for the firing squad of Mondays routines
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Kevin Patrick
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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 December 2022

I enjoyed so much this brilliant poem and appreciate your poetic words here.5 Stars from me. Honesty is the best policy. Great poem, Kevin.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 December 2022

I have read few times these best composed stanzas, with such lovely end rhymes and worded in a most thoughtful way. It has become a true honest poem about Sunday.to the poet's opinion

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Nosheen Irfan 18 December 2022

Exactly my feelings about Sundays. The sense of boredom is the strongest on holidays. I feel the same way about festive occasions too.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 December 2022

Kevin we're in the same boat Bravo! ! ! ! ! !

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David Wood 17 December 2022

Chin up, it could be worse you could be retired! !

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