Sunburst Comments

Akin to a Shakespearean sonnet. I love the change in mood - 'Sunburst' says it all! S :)

'Fighting for room the sun explodes, cracks a hole, splits Asunder all veils - and brilliance emits.' Spectacular image! A perfect conclusion to a fine poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Spectacular vivid amazing poem! The last five lines went off with a blast in my head. You are a true artist Fay in every way. 10 Karin Anderson

this poem has a unique rhyming scheme. that causes it to seem liek askipped heart beat.. i likey

A gunmetal sky heralds the rain another bleak day spent inside again the woodland flowers look so forlorn till kissed by the sun, natures reborn Ne'er cast a clout till May is out! summer is just around the corner! lovely poem Fay, thank you

When the eastern sky splits and the skies will dance with colors, And a bright light shall reach out of the heaven to call all of his children home. There I will set beside of my sister Fay. A flower pick by God's Sweet Hand Sooooo Beautiful sweet Fay 10++++++++++++++++

Beautiful fiery write Fay....love the images I get from this....Fi 10+++