Sunbeams (A Haiku) Comments

Tiny bit of magic in daily living; always to be treasure. Wonderfully captured by your poet's lense..(smile)

This is so beautiful. I love the short and sweet feel of a haiku. This one conveys a lot of imagery. Very well done and thank you for sharing :)

Sun and snow a magical combination. You make me feel nostalgic. Very lovely. Ten for you. Warm regards, Sandra

A picturesque image portrayed wit simple words confining to the scenical nature of the poetess. Nature is and infinite sphere of which the centre is everywhere and you have actually centralized the readers attention by a vista deified in the haiku.

You create Perfect haikus that reflect the moments of beauty in nature. Keep on! Thanks for sharing. A.

Hi Indira...I am a purist when it comes to writing haiku...'on it ' was required to make up the 4th and 5th syllables on line 3.

wonderful picture...a small suggestion...isn't 'on it' redundant?

This is magical Sandra. It captures a picturesque moment in time. 10 Karin Anderson

This is a flawless Haiku poem, Sandra, and has the proper syllable count and leaves the reader with a thought, as all true haiku poems do. Most writers of haiku, at least on poem hunter, rarely get it right, but you did in this excellent haiku poem. Carl.

Cheerful piece, lovely.

sunbeams on the snow froze the motes did u know......... short and sweet...can only say WOW

Was with this scene immediately Sandra - - a great haiku..... thanks 10 + ++ Fay

wow lovely scene of nature.. amazing haiku! !

a lovely haiku sandra...a picture in the last line...superb

Dancing sunbeams on snow covering, a beautiful description!

Wondrful imagery and very pictoresque.