Sunahsepha 7- Viswamitra Comments
My mother's blessings were with me
Even Mahaakal would stay away!
I knew no fear now!
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I am touched by your depth of knowledge in puranas, epics, cultural works, I start recommend it as a booklet to be circulated among school kids, because they find it difficult to understand epics, your flow of ideas and free verse., makes it simple and registered in mind once for all. I feel like reading epics, thanks for the inspiration, this is the awakening needed in every writer's work, you have done it, you have done justice to thus series, I am proud to be in your good books, thanks for your love and encouragement to a budding person like me, love you dear sir, take care
Hi Saraswathy, How do I thank you for your appreciation! If the students can relate to the story, nothing like it. Pl go ahead and distribute to them. I feel obliged, Saraswathy. Bow your head before you. Thank you.
Oh, this tale has gotten addictive! ! ! I particularly enjoyed the tapestry of human relationships in this segment of the tale and quite frankly I cheered when the bad guys got smoked..... they were after a child, after all. I have been on a colorful journey with this set of poems and I don't want to see it conclude. 10 ++++++++++++++++
Hi Susan, Thank you for reading the series and appreciating my effort. The series as such, is your as I have acknowledged. If you were not there to prod me on and off and pat me on the back, it would not have happened! Thanks is such small world before you.
No matter what keep plodding till you reach to your destination. No matter how evil forces try to force you to quit you are always a step ahead of your destination. Valuable lesson for life time. Thanks for sharing this beautiful story. I've to read all the other stories too to fully understand the story.100++++
The way of narration is excellent. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.
A gripping n eventful epic in your very skillful style of narration is a delight to read. The saga keeps the readers on the edge of their seats. An intriguing tale coming to a dramatic climax...the emotional impact is great. A metaphor for the ups n downs of life, the poem engages the reader on many levels.
Thank you Nosheen for your comments. Your words mean a lot to me, as you know. This tale is narrated in just a few shlokas in Valmiki Ramayanam, in a very inert tone. What has actually happened in the lives of the characters, was the point of my ponderings. The intrigues are already there in the story. But you will not realise it when you read it in original. The plight of the family haunted me for long, caused many sleepless nights and finally made me pour out this poem. Nosheen Thank you again.
Well done, Unnikrishnan-ji. This last section was the most gripping of the series. Your guiding me to the right verses in Valmiki Ramayana (Sanskrit) was great help. Thanks. (10)
Nair Sir, Thank you. It is really nice that you have been you have been able to navigate through Valmiki Ramayanam. If I have been the slightest cause of your foray into Ramayanam/ inquisitiveness I am much more happy. Thank you for all the words of appreciation and encouragement.
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Here lies proof of why I enjoy and appreciate your work and love in what you do. You're a pioneer in deed. Your style in writing is gripping and the purpose behind it all speaks volumes. Keep writing! ! ! ! ! I'm inspired, thank you! +++++++10
Thank you Jeanette for reading this series in full and favoring me with your wonderful comments. They mean a lot to me. Deeply obliged.