Wednesday, September 7, 2016

Sunahsepha 4- Unanswered Prayers Comments

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Sold, in exchange of a thousand cows
Soldiers took possession of me; kept
Under close guard, for fear of Indra
Flowing tears could melt no hearts.
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Susan Williams 30 November 2017

I really felt inside the narrator here- -lost, alone, frightened. This invests the reader to feel this way amd lures me on to part 5! ! ! I love poetry that lures! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++

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Susan Williams 30 November 2017

How in the world did I get so far behind in your delightful series? I've been sick lately but I like reading even when I'm sick. Now I have all these delightful Sunahsepha parts to enjoy through this Christmas season so all is good again. Thank you so much for the information in your Poet Notes- they ground me in the landscape of your poems

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 November 2017

Hi Susie, The series Sunahsepha is your. Please my note to the poem. The entire series is dedicated to by most beloved poet-friend Susan Williams! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Please read through...

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 November 2017

Hi Susie, The entire series of poems is yours, Please read the poet's note.. Dedicated to my most beloved poet-friend Susan Williams. So, be proud of yourselves.

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Marieta Maglas 17 November 2016

None of my tearful prayers evoked Any answer from Indra. Either they Did not reach him, or he was Reassured of his throne by now...................no one may find a way to meet God except through prayers..another beautiful poem....voted 10

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 November 2016

Hi Marieta, Thank you for reading the poems. I am delighted that you could relate to them and you enjoyed the story and the poetry. I am gratified. I explore you to continue reading the series. The story is completed in 7 parts. Pl bear with me making it so long. I would await your comments. Thank you again.

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Akhil Raveendran 08 September 2016

really enjoying reading your poem with story it contain.. thank you for sharing.. all the best for your next poem keep it up thank you.

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 October 2016

Hi Akhil, Hope you have read all the seven poems in the series. Thank you for the comments of appreciation. Pl feel free to share your opinion.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 07 September 2016

Well done, E.S.-ji. Go full steam ahead. Your notes are a great help. I am not aware of the intricacies of the story. Your scholarship is great help. (10)

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 September 2016

Sir, I am no scholar. Just an avid reader. I understand very little of what I read. Thank you for the kind comments. I am obliged.

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Stephani Kievaughan 07 September 2016

Such a good thing that you post these cultural awareness informative introductions.... ponders, and wonders how many will discover the majabarata, and the Ramayana through finding it right here.

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 September 2016

Thank you Stephani

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 07 September 2016

Indian classics are abundant with great stories of different times and characters. This story is such a story taken from classics. Likes it.

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 September 2016

Thank you Sir. The comments encourage me to proceed further

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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