Monday, September 5, 2016

Sunahsepha 3- Yajna Pasu, The Sacrificial Animal Comments

Rating: 5.0

Soon we got the answer.
Unable to find a man or animal
The king entered the forests
Where only sages lived.
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Susan Williams 05 November 2017

You have the gift of storytelling- -I am so thoroughly hook on this series! Oh, I just read your note about the poem! ! ! Thank you! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I remember begging you for another series having read the other ones and twiddling my fingers for a month or two waiting for the next saga to flow from your pen! Thank you! ! ! ! ! I shall enjoy this and savor this carefully so I won't run through this story too quickly and be back to waiting and I do so hate waiting! ! ! 10's all over this story! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 November 2017

Hi Susie, The Series of Sunahsepha was written on your encouragement. The story of a little boy selected as the sacrificial animal by the king... Finally rescued by the Sage. Child sacrifice is reported even today, albeit rarely, in some occult practices.... Susie, thank you so much for revisiting this series once again. I am deeply obliged. A trillion 100s for your words and your kindness...

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Jeanette Telusma 15 July 2017

.......That left me, the middle one. I spoke, 'When in fear of danger, child Looks for protection from parents. When they disown, the king shall protect him. Now, disowned by all, whom shall I appeal to? ' Wow... what a predicament? I must read on.

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 July 2017

Dear Ms Jeanette, Such is intrigues of the stories told in the epics. Your words are precious to me. I am obliged to you for the invaluable time you spent to read this series.And for the words of encouragement. Please do read on...

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Rini Shibu 16 June 2017

Wow superb story continues...father was restless because he may abandon his son for the well being of others. Son pleads for his life..you ended with his cry. I liked the last line...I did not want to die

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 June 2017

That's good.. Now I understand that you could relate to the story... Great Thank you for reading.. Please read on... Obliged for the comment.. You may be able to narrate this story to your children..

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Nosheen Irfan 07 September 2016

So sad. I really feel for the middle one. This saga reminds me of Greek mythology. Kings and gods n all the other elements are here. Quite a gripping read. Enjoying thoroughly.

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 September 2016

Hi Nosheen, Thank you very much for the appreciation. I have posted three more poems in the series. Have a look pl.

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Susan Williams 06 September 2016

Oh, no, cannot wait till the next installment of this saga. Storytellers Rule! ! ! ! 10

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 October 2016

Hi Susan, Now the story is complete, in 7 installments. Pl do read!

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Cigeng Zhang 06 September 2016

You are a very good story-teller in a poetic way. I enjoyed to read and learn.

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 September 2016

Thank you Cigeng.

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 05 September 2016

very pathetic, and thrilling, what next..? very interesting like to read all at a stretch, great poet thanks

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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