Sunday, March 8, 2015

Sun Sky And Smile Comments

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The dawn slowly raises his laden lids
To let the new sun send her golden beams
The tiny creatures rub their dormant eyes
And life is fresh, a new rebirth it seems
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ABD ELHAMID REMILI
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Dr Antony Theodore 07 March 2019

The virgin green where the joyful plays run Shaded beneath the deep blue of the sky When the sun smiles nothing aquals the fun The air is clear.the cheers go up and high.. you are very very poetic dear poet. thank u. first time i am reading you. thank u.. tony

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Chinedu Dike 08 March 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and penned in poetic diction. A lovely piece of poetry with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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