Sun Showing It's Strength Comments

An interesting enjoyed the rhythm and flow great job Deseves its place in Bri's Showcase 10 ++++

i'm about to put this in my/our May 2018 showcase, but with a note about It's. bri :)

(continued) ..... that & the poem are COOL! ! bri ;)

(continued) ...yes, optics? is an interesting subject, like many. sometimes i am in one room looking out that room's window on the back side of the house, and i 'see' a light in the 'distance', one which is really NOT where it appears to be. the light is actually coming from behind my back, from the house across the street, through a window on the other side of this house, through two open doorways & sneaking around me to appear 'miraculously' 'in the window i am staring at'. (cont.)

(continued) ...i'm pretty sure 'God' would attest to ALL MIRACLES which She felt that She could claim! ! on the other hand, the miracles you and i produce..........well, maybe she'd attest to YOURS, but MINE may be attested to by a LOWER POWER! ! ! i'm trying to a picture you watching the Sun beyond (behind? ?) your back; do you use a mirror? i DO like the poem. to MyPoemList. (to continue) ...

hi, RoseAnn. i have NOT read the poem yet. i laughed when i read the title....with It's, not Its. i thought i'd taught you properly! ! ! ha ha. maybe you should stop listening to AND, AT THE SAME TIME! , tapping to your music while writing and see if it makes a difference! ! ! ! ! ? or should the title be read as [The] Sun Showing It's [[aka it has; not it is]] Strength? ? ? ? hee-hee. ok, well MAYBE that was your idea all along! ? (to continue) ...