Sun shines down on all of the people around,
and there is no peace to be found.
Life has its moments of joy and dispare,
and there's occasional laughter in the air.
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An ok poem, I liked it, not too original but good. Keep at it! Rhiannon*
A sun shining down.. it makes people happy. and you're right about that. but it also makes some others sad... i dont know why but it does. i like it. its nice.