Sun (Rising And Setting) Comments

Illustration by similitude is phenomenal.......very well composed......I loved it...10

Like a blown out celestial candle Shrouds an' vanishes into smoky-twilight. A beautiful poem on different shades of sun.I enjoyed it.Well expressed. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

I like all the comparisons especially the last two! Like a rosy-cheeked baby about to cry Smothers its breath, turning orangy-crimson. Like a blown out celestial candle Shrouds an' vanishes into smoky-twilight. Fabulous! !

Like a diamond in a glorious crown sun glows with in brown. Sun shines with little more. Shines in far the sea shore.

like a halo around a hidden beacon smears the drawing peak aglow nice writing