Thursday, March 29, 2012

Sun Rise Comments

Rating: 5.0

The grey began to fade,
As the colors filled the sky,
The chill began to warm,
As the sun began to rise.
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juliet sinclarie
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Neko Girl 30 April 2012

such a beautiful poem the words just seem to flow hun they flow and they make a beautiful sound when they reach a readers ears, love yours, Tin MOUSE

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Dead Leaf 01 April 2012

Lovely poem...top marks******

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Heather Wilson 29 March 2012

A wonderful poem, such an enjoyable read.

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Rajendran Muthiah 29 March 2012

As the Sun rose, the lost were found. Both of them brought out the best from each other. And the perfect couple they are. Very nice poem. The colour changes at Sun-rise are minutely described.

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Valerie Dohren 29 March 2012

A lovely poem, starting with a sun rise and finishing with romance. Beautifully written.

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