Thursday, May 19, 2016

Sun-Rays Compose Poems Comments

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Newly sprouting of the bottle-green bo-tree leaves register …
Sun-rays compose poems with golden ink in the morning.
Usual words-emotion-style scattered around on the dust
On the bight of the river, sloped of the mountain of the spring
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SRIRANJI ARATISANKAR
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Michael Cochrane 25 May 2016

Very good poem yours Michael cohrane

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 May 2016

On the bright of the river! ! To respect nature with the right sense of mind.

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My dear friend Louis, the word is not 'bright'. It is actually 'bight' means bent, particularly of the river. Thank you for going through the poem.

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