Thursday, March 5, 2009

Sun Of Sahara Comments

Rating: 4.3

The lovely sun which gives light
All the time day and night
I hate her she became ma enemy
I am scared she might melt me
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Luwi Habte
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Raj Nandy 15 November 2009

A well expressed poem! I loved reading it! 10! -Raj

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Matt Mooney 10 September 2009

I want to hear more of these poems about Africa. I love this one. Had'nt thought much about the moon over the Sahara. All we hear about is the heat of the sun and the importance of an oasis for both man and camel.Today the sun is our great friend in Ireland. It is shining all day long after many weeks of of rain in our Summer season. We rejoice.I like the idea of the sun keeping its cool! No guessing for me but 10 for taking on not only the Sahara sun but inviting the moon to be a daytime companion as well. Read a few of my poems. I think you will find some reflections of yours in them.

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Current 93 14 April 2009

You are from Eritrea, no? One of the more exotic places I've heard of on here, certainly. As to the poem, I thought it was very well written and I'm sure has a very personal meaning to yourself. I'm not sure whether the spelling 'the' as 'z' is for poetic effect or not, but it's a very nice touch. I like it at least. ^__^

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Mauta Peter 04 April 2009

Is it about the sun really or some lost love Habte?

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Mauta Peter 04 April 2009

Despite our love for the sun it has become a problem maybe due to climate change.moon better its chasen away by the sun.Is it about the sun or you are lamenting some lost love?

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