Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Sun Moods Comments

Rating: 4.8

Rising golden, setting red,
I saw the sun receive and abandon
This world many times.
And between with a myriad of moods,
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Lillian Susan Thomas
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Sue Ann Simar 16 May 2009

I especially like lines two and three.

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Susan Jarvis 09 May 2009

Pathetic fallacy at its best! Some excellent alliteration in a poem conveying 'a myriad of moods' with an eloquent flourish. S :)

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