Birds are chirping to return,
They are in busy to take turn.
Sun is trying to have new burn,
Evening is ready here to learn.
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Festival of images. Like I'm watching a movie on sun setting. A 10.
Nice work with the ways of nature; as the sun settles down. Thanks for sharing.
A very nice depiction of what happens at end of day. Nature prepares to rest, and refresh itself for the new day to come. Calm and peace can be felt in your poem.
A day's journey very well put together in artistic style....Loved it Sir.
Painted a nice picture to words Will read some more of your work
Wow you remind me of my home, during the sunset. Thank you for this amazing poem, drawing the beauty of the sunset. Thanks 10!