Sun Is Falling Down Comments

From East the sun come A hope in the air my friend, A new day to borrow Live the light with smile Till it dark Till we at night Where to the west sun gone But came moon remind Sleep and worry not Till the sun comes again I will be there I always here so sleep and wait Sun will come again from east He is coming... but time for sleep And new light will come from east And i will move to west and so life is my friend nothing stay forever but it happened for good moon and sun..tell u all_Soul

Beautiful poem..You have presented very beautifully..Sun shine give powerful light which makes our life bright, but Darkness or night is another side of coin, which also give us something. When we are alone in dark, we can search for ourselves inside and understand the meanings of life too...Loved the way, you presented.

O the very true. good poem, thanks, Only a true poet can say like this. I invite you to read my poems and comment.