Thursday, November 29, 2007

Sun In Conflict With The Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Revered by everyone
Is it my Might?
Not stared at and
No footsteps in my landscape!
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rajagopal haran
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Sandra Fowler 01 July 2008

Pure enchantment. A magical conversation indeed. Lovely work. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Anjali Mandokhot 30 November 2007

what wonderful thoughts full of imagery of excellent kind.......how like a kid the sun complaints...i wish sumone could explain this sun that its in awe that it cannot be stared yet we love to be embraced by its warmth........that its light leads to accomplishment of dreams......that night could only exemplify......i wish sumone could question this sun......is there a bud dat bloomed in night or a bird that chirped in darkness? ......and tell it that it is loved by nature and poets whether they sing about twilight or moonlight......all belongs to it.

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Indira Babbellapati 29 November 2007

honoured...rajgopal...why, this is sheer magic...!

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Patricia Gale 29 November 2007

Interesting piece...imagery takes one away

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Peter Cyril Riloskovic 29 November 2007

Very nice poem with pleasing images.

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